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Post by raporfest on Apr 5, 2009 14:59:24 GMT -5
Before you read it remeber this -It's only a first draft and my first time writing a script. - At many points, it does't read like a script - I'm only 15 - Lot of times I have an idea in my head and when I write down on paper, I'm thinking more about the idea then spelling and grammer. So my grammer and spelling is quite bad. Here it is. justiceleaguescript.blogspot.com/2008_09_01_archive.html
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Post by cthuihuspawn on Apr 5, 2009 16:05:02 GMT -5
I have the same problem with grammer dog
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Post by raporfest on Apr 5, 2009 20:36:59 GMT -5
What do you think of the script?
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Post by hahampe on Apr 7, 2009 15:19:58 GMT -5
I liked it, but dont use the Nolan Batman, his to "real" for a JL film
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Post by raporfest on Apr 7, 2009 19:05:57 GMT -5
What were your favorite parts?
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Post by deathstroke15 on May 4, 2009 9:05:47 GMT -5
wow that was pretty good
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Max
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"The palace is not limited. The library is limitless and periodic." - Borges
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Post by Max on May 5, 2009 14:51:49 GMT -5
The format needs major fixing
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Post by raporfest on May 5, 2009 18:33:41 GMT -5
As I said, this is only a basic idea (story wise) on how I would do a JLA film and many times it doesn't read like a script.
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