Post by koopaking96 on May 6, 2009 16:53:31 GMT -5
hey guys! i've always been making my own superheroes, but i recently made up a new story that i sort of like better than the others. i think it will be called alpha man ,and this is the main story....
Rob winston is in his senior year of high school. one day he meets an old man on the street who tells him he is going to acquire great power. rob ignores it at first, but he keeps meeting the old man everywhere who is telling him different details about the "power" he is going to receive. the old man tells him that he is passing on his power to him because he is becoming weak and is going to die. Rob just believes this to be a joke and tells the old man angrily to leave him alone. the next day when rob is taking a walk, he is the subject of a mugging. when he punches one of the muggers, they go flying across the street, unconsious and bleeding. the other muggers, frightened, run away. thats when our hero realizes the old man wasn't joking. he is afraid of this power he has acquired, and is hides it. (the powers he acquires are super strength, flight, and super speed). the old man meets him again with an "i told you so" message and also tells him that he is to use these powers for protecting citizens. at first he says no, but eventually he agrees. once he agrees, the old man is gone. but our hero has one condition if he is to fight crime. and that is to get paid for it. once the police witness him thwart a crime, they realize how much they can get done with him there and agree to pay him for fighting crime.
and the story will basically take off from there. after throwing a main villain in after the main series of events, i think i'll have myself a superhero story! what do you think?
Rob winston is in his senior year of high school. one day he meets an old man on the street who tells him he is going to acquire great power. rob ignores it at first, but he keeps meeting the old man everywhere who is telling him different details about the "power" he is going to receive. the old man tells him that he is passing on his power to him because he is becoming weak and is going to die. Rob just believes this to be a joke and tells the old man angrily to leave him alone. the next day when rob is taking a walk, he is the subject of a mugging. when he punches one of the muggers, they go flying across the street, unconsious and bleeding. the other muggers, frightened, run away. thats when our hero realizes the old man wasn't joking. he is afraid of this power he has acquired, and is hides it. (the powers he acquires are super strength, flight, and super speed). the old man meets him again with an "i told you so" message and also tells him that he is to use these powers for protecting citizens. at first he says no, but eventually he agrees. once he agrees, the old man is gone. but our hero has one condition if he is to fight crime. and that is to get paid for it. once the police witness him thwart a crime, they realize how much they can get done with him there and agree to pay him for fighting crime.
and the story will basically take off from there. after throwing a main villain in after the main series of events, i think i'll have myself a superhero story! what do you think?